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A second part of a unfinish flash.

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I actually pet sound effects in this one AND add a little something at the end to make some humor in there.
Enjoy it if you can.
Frist pair of characters that were fighting are own by :iconjoineth:
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Bar-Kun's avatar
hmm... well i told you already that you should fix some things in the art but allow me to say a bit more that i noticed, just for the heck of it:
his face is a bit too wide if you ask me
his quills are small compared to his already wide face, and compared to the sprite
the shooting arm... you already know the deal
and the other arm, in my opinion should be lower

and just a pro tip, use the line tool, not the brush, unless you have a tablet (like me) and you master lines (not like me XD)

but overall id say it's alright, just work on the closeups

i didn't really see it up close then, but now i did so... yeah, keep animating this tho, dun be lazeh